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01-15-2008 09:15,
The story and possible political messages behind it were twisted so tight that any desire on my part to attempt a critique of the writing was lost long before getting to the end.
I must say however, even though after the first paragraph was read and I was sure I was reading a dud, I was definitely curious enough to read on to see just how tightly you might twist this piece or perhaps maybe, just maybe your opening was just off and the rest would be worthy. The former curiosity prevailed of course.