Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by dockyard 01-14-2008 10:53,   ... thank-you, thank-you. this is definitely one of my better pieces. my only qualms with it is that it sounds too choppy. but i think i'm overly neurotic. i always think this way about my writing (part of the reason why i write poetry)   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story