Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Roadkill315 01-14-2008 07:38,   ... Well, very impressed. In the beginning it was the characterization of Grandpa which provided the interest to read on. When it came to story telling time I really had no idea where the story would go but at that point I did have a moments despair that the story was going to be about him telling his grand son a story. But that despair was oh so brief. I really enjoyed how well you included the grand son in the telling of the story. He didn't speak or ask too many questions, it seemed just right to credibly identify him as the typical curiosity seeking youngster, well done. In the end, the ending of the story completely erased that earlier despair I had as grandpas story was a real winner.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story