Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by C.R. Vard 01-13-2008 14:02,   good flowed nicely, and had a creative structure... some gramatical errors and missing words. Loved the line comparing the person's life to an impressionist painting, really set the tone of the story well.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story