Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by darknstormy 01-13-2008 07:11,   Regret Regretfully I found the transition from the first part of the story to the last part somewhat uneasy It confused me a little- although I like stories that end with an unexpected twist. This could have been more unexpected. Some spelling errors.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story