Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Zombie Punk 10-01-2008 05:23,   Morgan I like this story -- just like the previous one. It definetly has its hints of mystery, and they're written extremely well. Good dialogue, BELIEVABLE dialogue. At first when the narrator kepte repeating Jason's entire name I found that annoying, but I'm already grown to the whole name, so anything else wouldn't seem right. Although, I must admit ... something seems missing in these stories. Not quite sure what it is, but something's off. Oh well ... off to the next.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story