Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by J Writes Again 09-27-2008 00:59,   Interesting This line really supported the oddness of his experience..."The foul stench of sulfur made love to his nostrils." If anything matches the feeling one gets when looking at an oompha loompa that line says it. Needed a bit longer transition. Still your imagery is good.  J   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story