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01-10-2008 12:38,
It'll be hard for most to understand some of the terms you used on here, because they probably don't speak any Spanish, but I understood everything perfectly, and really liked your story. It reminds me of Victor Villasenor's style of writing. Though, I feel it should be part of a novel. It seems that it's only a excerpt of something bigger. You should take it further.