Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Yanu 01-10-2008 11:54,   Wow! I fell in love with both characters (the dialog is genius); something essential in every story. The concept you bring forth is intriguing as well. The are a few things that need polishing; but, it is a 'rough copy'.     On to the next story.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story