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Posted by allmine
09-24-2008 14:11,
 
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It isn't bad...your characterization of the one guy is pretty good, but still....why is he going to kill the ambassador? I mean I suppose that isn't really necessary. Watch your sentence use, some of them could be combined into longer sentences, you understand. Overall, I liked it...
 
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