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01-09-2008 10:41,
to be honest, this is my third time at this story.
i arrived the first time, read the apparent "big meany" first paragraph; thought "not my line of work" and wandered away.
the second time, i looked at the distance of the scroll bar, relative to the range it needed to travel on the page to get to the bottom, and i did not have enough time.
the third time, i got to the third "character" and could not stop reading. i liked it, and now crave some interaction between them.
write on!