Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by starrr 01-07-2008 12:50,   ... At the beginning I thought of this woman being unknown to the narrator. He describes her as a figure of perfection, but the type of perfection only known from a distance. This type, I mean, that you've watched them and their actions but have never truly known them/talked to them. Their beauty and perfection comes from an imaginary source, something of which the eye of the beholder creates in their own mind.  But then in the end, the narrator does know this person and tells the audience of what kind of pain and suffering they are going though in light of this woman’s absence.  I like the idea of creating this perfect image in your head of something that may, at the time, seem inpenetratable. To create an ideal, to admire, to think of a person you don't know and create all the above without knowing... I like that a lot. That being said, this story didn’t go where I expected it to, nor did I exactly want to go there either  Overall, pretty good... obviously very personal   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story