Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by bamaboy 09-13-2008 10:50,   ... Good start, You painted a very good picture of the whole scene in my mind, a slightly disturbing scene, but it was good. Also you have"I was took one..." just a slight error I noticed, other than that great story.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story