Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pilgrim 09-07-2008 08:44,   ... Well spoken.   You have a talent to use words to your advantage. GOod rhyming and flow.   Many writers that I've read use commas after every line and a lot of times it breaks the flow. You do very well to keep the flow. GOod job.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story