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07-02-2007 12:01,
The story isn't very descriptive, true, but the idea was definitely an original one. You have quite the imagination. I loved the turn of events; it was certainly unexpected. You had the element of surprise very well played out here. Something to build up to that crucial moment would have been good too. But I really liked your idea. You sure had me gasping at the end. ^-^
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