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01-04-2008 00:21,
this left me a bit confused. was fred a girl friend or counselor?was chris hurting himself just to be noticed or was he really suicidal?
Don't wish to be too pedantic, but he called "threw" an open window. "sitting on the floor where he stood." good storyline, perhaps a little more editing. well done,.i haven't got that far yet.