Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Zombie Punk 07-30-2008 19:02,   ... Damn, I don't know how I missed this one! this was awesome! I loved your choice of rhymes and the flow and how the words got smaller as the tale progressed. I bet you could make this longer though, just a little bit though. Too long and it'd get tiresom, you know? I say maybe four more stanzas maximum but it you could make this better I think. Maybe have more scenes of your main character as ruler and what not.     Kudos on a great/cool Poem!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story