Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Forsaken 07-27-2008 10:03,   ok This was ok, I liked the story your are telling, but it got to the point where I was asking myself when it was going to finish. But I did like it and I think that it is good; maybe you could break this up into smaller chapters?    Carry on with this, in smaller chapters. :-)    Jess   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story