Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by eternalsunshine 07-24-2008 07:31,   ... I liked   "I died that day too.    I became cold and cruel without you. "    However, it bothered me that you used head & dead to rhyme twice. If your poem is based on rhyme, you should vary them as much as possible.    Good story though, I liked the imagery of the person writing this all out in jail.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story