Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Forsaken 07-23-2008 11:17,   nice... Good poem. the rythem kept me reading. You can almost imagine a drum beat in your head as you read it. The only thing you could on with this poem is to vary the sentences a bit more. Other than that, it's a good poem. Keep writing like this.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story