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07-23-2008 04:35,
Great story and I really liked the twist at the end.
Any longer and it would have lost any meaning, shorter and I'd have been scratching my head.
The length was spot on, the characters were perfect and the entire story beautifully told.
Excellent - one of the best I've read on here.
Phil