Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Squall1 07-22-2008 20:40,   ... I liked how you slowly brought in new information to the story, starting with a person who changes things, and ending with a person in prison. I was impressed by your storytelling   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story