Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Something Indecent 07-22-2008 16:55,   ... The mind coaster hit a sour note for me as well. I liked the idea of the poem but the thought of a mind only having one rail be that it goes up and down still seems limited. Good poem though.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story