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07-21-2008 21:37,
i really did think there was a good story here but you ruined the ending ghost parents and such you could've gone somewhere really exciting i will admit your story is conveying a good message and was very well written grammer and such was nice and easy to read but the ghost parents boring... but still a good job wish i had was able to like it more