Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by C.R. Vard 07-21-2008 21:35,   ... this is really just to heart wrenching to read much more of. there was really only one thing i didnt like:    'The least it could do was change it up a lot, it was starting to sound like a broken record.'- i thought this sentence was a bit choppy and then there's the simile at the end.     Overall though this was really very well written   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story