Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by ams 07-21-2008 15:13,   ... i thought that it was pretty good. i liked how you experimented and used only dialogue, it went well with a humorous piece. a few minor grammar issues but overall it was nicely written. good job   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story