Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Captain Morgen 07-21-2008 13:46,   ... The idea of the story is quite good. However, I found that it could have been written a little better. There are some subject-verb agreement conflicts and some areas don't make sense unless read twice. There is definite potential here. Keep on writing :)   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story