Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Mokusa 07-21-2008 11:32,   ... I think this is a really great idea and I like how you delivered it, short and sweet. However your use of the term 'mind coaster' completely derailed me. It doesn't share the same grace the rest of the poem has and comes off kind of hokey. But that's just my opinion.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story