Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Something Indecent 07-21-2008 06:54,   ... I agree with JJ. You may want to reread this and fix some of your errors so it flows better. I did enjoy it though. You describe a strange world that should be expanded upon.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story