Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Hodders 07-21-2008 01:40,   ... Very good, I liked how, when I read it, it flowed very fast as if it's the speakers thoughts or paranoia. The lack of punctuation really helped. I think I liked the first stanza the best: 'Fearing, clearing/Out my past'. It's a strange beginning for a poem but it definitely makes you want to read on.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story