Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by JJtyler 07-20-2008 20:17,   Good job I like that you created a world here, sketching it out and giving us a glimpse at this strange profession of conning people. Good Sci-Fi stuff.     There were a few sentences that I had to read over again, and that may be due to over writing something, such as: logic took my eyes... But that may be my own preference, and could be great writing.    Bottom line: I enjoyed it. Good luck and keep writing.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story