Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by JJtyler 07-20-2008 20:08,   Enjoyed this chapter I thought the flow was real nice, and it moved along quickly. I'll be looking forward to reading more when I get a chance.     Good luck and keep writing.     One thing: top couple of paragraphs: What do you say, instead of 'what do say'. Unless that is a different syntax that I don't know.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story