Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by cookingWine 07-20-2008 19:31,   ... I get lost in stories like this. Definitely nothing towards the offensive end of comments here, the murder/mystery/badass stories aren't really my niche.  I touched and skimmed over bits and it looks pretty tight as far as grammar/words go, which is rare, but the way that it closes out in almost exactly the same way and place as the first chapter closed out. Might work for some, not so much for me.  Keep on keeping on, Brooke.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story