Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dr Lucifer 07-20-2008 16:11,   Dialogue is tough It is not easy to tell a story with nothing but dialogue. The effort was a good one. More writers, self included, have difficulty here. Keep up the effort and you'll become a master at it. That'll give you a definite edge.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story