Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Squall1 07-20-2008 12:53,   All right I like where it went, and the choice not to give them names or anything (it made the reading flow smoother). Could be better, but a good start with dialogue.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story