Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by r.e.potter 07-20-2008 11:31,   ... So the story continues. A scorned son that has waited decades to act out revenge against his fathers killer, but never possesed the fortitude in doing so...until this mystery man strikes a deal.     I have a sneaky suspicion as to who this stranger is, but as ive come to learn from many mysteries, dont count your chickens before they're hatch.    You have done an excellent job keeping the reader in tune with this story. Very well thought of and laid out.    My only problem and its so minute that its hardly worth mentioning, so tell me to go fly a kite if you like,,,but..through out this chapter you refer to the character as Solomon,,,then Goldblum..next sentence its Solomon again, and then again back to Goldblum..this continues through out.    Just something that stood out for me while reading this great story.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story