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07-19-2008 12:39,
brought back the horrors of the day for me. only quibble is, i found it odd a muslim man would be named Yeshua, the jewish word for jesus. I do not know what the 'muslim' word might be however. So, take that tiny criticism with a grain of salt.
To be honest, I have often worried that the air marshal would be overpowered (i fly a lot) thus providing a weapon to a bad guy...
Quite a good tale! Made me sad for a while. Not sure if that was your intent, but I really felt something. Which is the goal of good writing... to make the reader feel.