Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Forsaken 07-19-2008 03:50,   creepy Nice short story, it's fast paced which is good. It's how a vampire story should be. It was good how you described the kill, 'He growled and he bit down into her neck. Like a dog, he ripped into her tendons, taking much ecstasy in his meal'   What you've creted can sometimes be hard.   *I think the last part kind of ruined it for me; why did she have to get pregnant?  I think this could be very good, just needs alittle bit more to the story. Maybe you could build upon the vampire?   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story