Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Something Indecent 07-18-2008 22:18,   ... It was pretty good. One suggestion though. You should try to use different words throughout the piece so they don't come across as redundant. The main word I'm speaking of is road. It's every where. Aside from that though this was a good opening for your series. I liked the cigar in the eye. Totally brutal.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story