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07-18-2008 21:11,
-I think that you should try not to use the same word in a sentence. It reads better if you mix it up. Also I think you meant a buttefly knife when you mentioned using a few wrist snaps to open it.
+ I thought it was very entertaining and a fun read. I liked the gore along with incessant itching. I can totally relate to that. Overall I think you did a good job. :)