Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Forsaken 07-18-2008 04:42,   scary This was kinda scary. It is very dark. The reaper seems really cruel; he taunts her and seems to take pleasure in this. The way you wrote this means that th reader can almost imagine the reaper taunting her, and that is what makes the story really effective.  When the reaper is describing love lost, I could almost feel sorry for him; creating a sense of compassion for this creature makes the story even more appealing.    Nice job!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story