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07-18-2008 01:30,
Weird. The story got my attention early on, and, as r.e.potter said I was expecting the father to find some inner strength to protect his little girl. The ending, spoilt the story I think, little girls like this are not beleivable. Even when I read fantasy, I need to beleive in it.