Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by resistanceisfreedom 07-17-2008 19:02,   ... i did like the story you were telling and i really liked how you kept the same end rhyme in each stanza. but the last stanza kind of killed it for me. where you used again twice. for some reason, that threw off the piece for me.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story