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07-17-2008 18:15,
This started off as a burglerized house gone bad. I thought the dad would become super human when they touched his little girl and break bad on them...nope. Won't give it away for others but to be honest, you had me but then you lost me with the ending. To unreal for me digest.
But Ill give it a 4 cause I liked the beginning.