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07-17-2008 08:52,
Phil, very well written story! I had no problem visioning this in my head as I read.
one smallish/biggish problem though. Bruises are caused by blood trapped beneath the skins surface due to broken blood vessels. If there was no blood in the old man's body, there wouldnt be bruises either, or they would be hard to see on the outside of his skin. :o