Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by philneale1952 07-17-2008 07:19,   ... No comments until now, but having read the first three chapters of a work like this, I think I'm now sufficiently inside the story.    Had a friend at college some 30 years ago with such a compulsion, and the family background was startlingly similar to the one you portray.    Can't imagine what's going through her mind, but you're painting a stark picture of what she sees as her inevitable fate.    The effect on the rest of the family isn't under consideration and this is typical of the selfishness (in my opinion) of those suffereing from this sort of mental stress.    Just one minor point - is the over use of her name a deliberate ploy?    Will follow on the chapters as you write them.    Keep it up.    Phil   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story