Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by elenalda 07-08-2008 22:18,   ... The abstractions are beautiful but are just stepping over the line where they're not clear enough to follow. Toy with it--it's like tuning a string. You go too far in one direction and then bring it back to normalcy.     This story has the most potential of anything I've read here so far, and that makes me really happy.     Here's what I've assumed: narrator is reminiscing about a girlfriend who walked out on him (the door slamming) and now she's calling back. He's stuck in a rut, worrying about the button thing (not sure what that refers to) and wondering if he can make it work. He's at a dead end, and not sure if Anna's the way out.     On track? Ish?   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story