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07-08-2008 13:53,
Cute and trite, like a romantic comedy. I don't really like your title, and I think you could maybe do a little research because your characters are somewhat unreal. But not bad! You stick well to the idea of multiple viewpoints and gave both characters distinctive personalities, which is good.