Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by indianaman130 07-08-2008 10:42,   ... I try to comment without reading comments. Obviously you salute the Union Jack, yet your story can be any detective in any industrialized nation. Got right into the story, enough mystery to make me wonder, then the cloak and dagger stuff very nicely written in. I can see where it could have ended, but you got a great charactor here that could spin off several shorts before going after the Big plot.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story