Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by eternalsunshine 07-07-2008 05:41,   ... This was very cute, and very realistic. I think every girl has tried that diet at some point!    I would definitely recommend cleaning it up though if you plan on making it into a book. The punctuation just seems a little messy, like it was written sort of haphazardly. Still an excellent read though!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story